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Lightning
fluorescent zig-zags
crackles on the radio
my heart skips a beat
fluorescent blue-white
against black-cushion ring box
heaven’s diamond fling
zig-zags prelude bass
rumbles decay to stutters
stillness patters rain
crackles interfere
chamber music percussion
bringing storm inside
on the stately notes
flute, cello and violin
static charges crash
the rain sings snappy
wild snare drum solo tattoo
gurgle gutter song
radio goes dead
blinding flash, deafening crack
plunges into black
my hands grope candles
matches, lighter, a flashlight
circles of warmth here
heart of storm weakens
lightning flashes, thunder waits
not so keen to pounce
skips making response
to lightning’s flick on curtains
dark wins back the night
a break in the rain
only the dripping downspouts
even sighing winds
beat a safe retreat
far-off rumbles in the black
distant lightning sheet
© 2012 by Violet Nesdoly
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I call this an extended haiku but perhaps it isn’t one by an official definition (which I couldn’t find). Anyway, what’s happening here is that each word in the original haiku becomes the beginning word in successive haiku. It’s a fun challenge.
This poem is submitted to Poetry Friday, hosted this week by Paper Tigers.
