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Jul
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Declaration

Declaration

The publisher says, “In order to be heard
these days, you need a platform
from which you network.
You are your own best trumpet.
There is no one way to do it right.
Think out of the box.

 

I feel like I’m in a box
part of a vast herd
clambering for the right
to take centre stage on the platform
grab the trumpet
and become star of the network.

 

And where does Jesus’ network
fit inside this box?
He condemned the ones with the trumpet
eager to be seen and heard
on the synagogue and street platform.
He insisted on no personal privilege or right

 

ignored the added-on rule and rite
that interfered with His net work
of catching men, used hills and boats as platform.
The gatekeepers of His time couldn’t box
Him in. People came to Him in mighty herd.
The way He met their need was His trumpet.

 

Need is also our trump. It
spurs us on to find what is right
for us, to find what needs to be heard.
Finders tell seekers and grow an organic network
leading to the treasure box
from a divinely engineered platform.

 

Mr. Publisher, you can insist on a numbers platform
expect me to play the Twitter, Facebook and LinkedIn trumpet
and all the megaphones found in the publicity box.
Getting a contract from you is not my reason to write.
If my words don’t fill a need, even a giant network
won’t make them worth being heard.

 

I hereby abandon the rite of building my platform
growing my network, sounding my trumpet.
God, engineer my words heard, or not, for I’m climbing out of this box.

© 2011 by Violet Nesdoly

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This sestina was the easiest poem in this form I have written. It kind of fell into place—perhaps because I’ve been thinking of platforms, networks and trumpets as they relate to writing for a long time. As you can tell, I’ve also been bothered by the insistence (of agents, publishers, editors et al) that a book is only worth the while of a publishing company if the writer delivers up her/his mighty platform of readers.

However, I understand the thinking and sympathize. I see the sense of not taking risks on unknown writers, especially at a time when your business is already struggling to survive.

So then I guess the ball is back in the writer’s court to build a platform. But the way I see people building a platform feels phoney to me. Or maybe I’m reading my own tendency toward phoniness into what I see others doing (friend, friend, friend on FB, follow, follow, follow on twitter).

On the other hand, there were writers who, without knowing they were doing it, picked up a following. I think of The Shack, written by unknown William P. Young selling in the thousands of copies. I think of the popularity of Ann Voskamp’s Holy Experience blog and her NY Times bestseller One Thousand Gifts book. I think of my fav little devotional My Utmost for His Highest by Oswald Chambers, still going strong through several generations. I ask, Why? I think the answer is — they fill a need.

And I believe there is also a divine element at work. When something is spiritually true and valuable and nourishing, in some unexplainable way God helps to spread the word.

I ask myself — does my writing fill a need? Do I have the patience to see whether it’s lasting enough to garner its own platform? And do I have the humility that will be content with never publishing a book if that’s the way things work out?

I submit this poem to Tweetspeak Poetry‘s challenge to capture a conversation in the sestina-form poem.

I also submit this to Seedlings in Stone‘s In “On and Around Monday” meme, where  this week L. L. Barkat expresses another aspect of the same sentiment — only far more subtly.

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10 Responses to “Declaration”


  1. July 25, 2011 at 11:29 am

    Your sestina reads as if written effortlessly.

    (Clever way you got in: trump. It )

    On words filling a need: sometimes the need is that of the writer herself, sometimes they’re “heard” by no more than a single person. In either case, the words are never wasted.

  2. July 25, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    This is marvelous! A conversation between you and the publisher, but maybe you and you.

    Economics means we need a platform to publish. But we don’t need a platform to be artists, as Maureen so beautifully says. And we don’t need a platform to do the spiritual work you speak of.

    I struggle with all this too. Partly because I am a professional writer. I struggle between the art and the economics. When I was a graphic designer, the art eventually won out. I could not get paid to design and be happy. So I left the profession.

    Now, that is a fine and sweet compliment at the bottom of this post. I didn’t feel subtle at all! :) I felt like my complaint was a pretty whiny complaint :)

  3. July 25, 2011 at 1:23 pm

    Whoa! This is amazing! Yes, it sure did fall into place.
    I like the “net work” in the 4th sestet. :)

  4. 4 waysidewordgarden
    July 25, 2011 at 8:54 pm

    Your sestina is wonderful! I immensely enjoyed this! Your conversation and topic are interesting to read; a great conversation!

  5. July 25, 2011 at 8:56 pm

    Your sestina is wonderful! I immensely enjoyed this! Your conversation and topic are interesting to read; a great conversation! (oops I hit “send” too soon on my previous comment (from me as well, waysidewordgarden)

  6. July 26, 2011 at 7:51 pm

    Oh, the platform…

    Loved this! Every bit of it. And the conversation here in the comments.

  7. July 27, 2011 at 11:32 am

    Thanks for all the input! I agree, Maureen and L.L. about writing being an activity one does for oneself. However, there comes a time when we also want to share it. It’s that aspect and beyond that, making a contribution to the wider world and how one does that, that I’m wrestling with here especially as it relates to joining the cacophony that is social media marketing. So much more could be said…

  8. July 29, 2011 at 10:04 am

    I needed to listen in on the conversation, to realize yet again the direction in which I speak, to remember why it is right to disregard an expectation of largess and cling to small and certain gifts that maintain value long after the glitter loses luster. Thank you.


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